Screenwriting : My First Script by Anita Lindawaty SSi MSi

anyone join moviepoet.com? just info: i join contest this month, my title script: LIE. Please feel free to vote, review and comment my script next month. I'll apreciate ur vote, ur review and ur comment. Really. FYI, it's my first short script. I plan to make it complete, perhaps become serial. here my moviepoet profile: http://www.moviepoet.com/member.aspx?member=Anita%20Lindawaty