Cinematography : My new short film 'BULIBOT' by Jonathan Bark

Thanks everyone for your feedback on 'coinscience'. I've been working on a cyber-bullying film using your advice for last time. http://youtu.be/5s48DbNmST0 What do you think about it, anything I could learn for next time? Ps. The sound was recorded with a H4, but I was going for a muffled phone sound