Filmmaking / Directing : Project Greenlight Short by Matt Burns

So most of my shorts are over three minutes in length so I'm having trouble coming up with a short to submit to Project Greenlight. Here is one short that's about three minutes (it runs a little over but I've already trimmed it down). Does anybody think this would work? It's creative but may not be professional enough. It's called HAUNTED HOUSE. Let me know your reaction. Thanks! Link: http://youtu.be/wEA-1r2FUO4