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By Rutger Oosterhoff

GENRE: Action
LOGLINE:

When her father is captured by the greedy owner of an underground casino, an unorthodox cat burglar must convince her professional poker player sister to join forces to take down the bad guy and rescue their father.

SYNOPSIS:

The logline before I posted it on www.logline.it :

In a Navajo casino, the from Tourette suffering leader of a racist redneck card counting gang goes all in at poker.

The logline now:

When her father is captured by the greedy owner of an underground casino, an unorthodox cat burglar must convince her professional poker player sister to join forces to take down the bad guy and rescue their father.Ideas about possible backstory:

--Riegiev--

If you’re going to have the bad guy be Navajo, you should have the father be Native American as well.

Perhaps a Navajo law enforcement officer investigating the casino. When he discovers illegal activity they capture him.

This event sets the story in motion as the ‘wild’ younger sister who took on life as a cat burglar (To steal back Navajo artifacts) must convince her by the book and uptight sister to join forces to rescue dad.

Perhaps the sister is now a district attorney but in her youth was an amazing poker player.

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