Screenwriting : First Script Done! by Margaret Yoder

Margaret Yoder

First Script Done!

I finally finished my first script and uploaded it. It's probably a bit rough, I'm not new to writing but I am new to screenwriting. Wouldn't mind some fresh eyes and constructive criticism.

Phillip E. Hardy, "The Real Deal"

That's a slice of awesome! Congrats.

Doug Nelson

I didn't find the script. I find the basic premise interesting but your logline needs a little tidying up. Having a snake on her head is gonna be a bad day for the hair/makeup person. I don't know your intent but I read a lot of comedy in it.

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