Screenwriting : Hi everyone by Hermina Orcsik

Hi everyone

This is my first completed screenplay, and I would truly appreciate any honest feedback or constructive criticism.

English is not my native language, so I’m aware there may be language or formatting issues. I’m very open to learning and improving, and I know the script will eventually need a polish editor.

If you have suggestions on who I could send this project to, or advice on next steps, I would be extremely grateful.

I’m also thankful for any recommendations for free or affordable screenwriting software.

Thank you so much in advance to everyone who takes the time to read or respond. It truly means a lot to me.

Maurice Vaughan

Hi, Hermina Orcsik. Stage 32 has feedback services I suggest checking out (www.stage32.com/scriptservices).

Stage 32 has a blog called "Screenwriting Software To Use If You Can't Afford Final Draft." www.stage32.com/blog/screenwriting-software-to-use-if-you-cant-afford-fi...

Reach out to the Success Team at success@stage32.com. Geoff and his team can help you connect with producers, executives, and more.

And you could post your script on your profile. Producers search profiles for projects. That and networking are how I sold four short scripts to a producer. Click the gear symbol in the top right-hand corner and select “Edit profile” in the drop-down menu. Scroll down to “Loglines” and click “Add/edit loglines” to the right of “Loglines.” You can also post your script on your profile this way: www.stage32.com/loglines (near the top where it says “Add a Logline”)

Hermina Orcsik

Maurice Vaughan thank you so much

Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Hermina Orcsik.

Göran Johansson

Like you, English is not my native language. If you plan to send your script to people in USA, please remember that different countries use different paper size. A4 in most countries, but USA is one of the few exceptions. Production companies in USA want you to use the legal paper size, which means there is room for about 10 % less text.

Hermina Orcsik

Göran Johansson thank you very much

Göran Johansson

Nice that you liked what I wrote. Good luck.

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