I'm looking to swap a screenplay for notes, preferably in thriller or horror genre. I need feedback on IN THE STILL OF THE NIGHT, a feature thriller.
Screenwriting : Screenplay swap anyone? by Eric Dickson
Screenplay swap anyone?
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maybe in a few weeks. I have two I am reading right now.
Not looking to swap, Eric, but if you ever want me to run the rule over anything you have, do get in touch. www.philmscribe.com
Thanks, guys. I'll check out your sight, Phil. I believe I've been there before.
do you know this video essay:
How To Make an Effective Horror Movie by Moises & Sergio Velasquez https://youtu.be/r9fGeCRcf5A
Great video. Thanks for that. I tried to follow a lot of those rules in this script. Especially with the use of the apartment and fear of the unknown. The why is this happening and who is doing it? The red herrings. Giving the lead a heartbreaking backstory with her losing her first job in LA and the boyfriend who has moved on with her best friend back home. I'd love to hear your thoughts on this script if you ever get the time.