Screenwriting : Second draft of my short by Nikita Simpson

Nikita Simpson

Second draft of my short

Good morning - hope you're all well!

I have just completed the second draft of my folk horror/thriller short 'Whistle-Stop'. I'm content with what I've changed for now. But I would be so grateful for true feedback. If you wouldn't mind giving it a read here: https://www.stage32.com/loglines/68663 . I look forward to hearing what you think ! 

Thank you all in advance!! 

Nikita 

Maurice Vaughan

Good morning, Nikita Simpson. Hope you're well too! Congratulations on finishing the second draft!

It's the last week of Stage 32's November Write Club. It can help you reach a goal(s), it's a chance to connect with writers, directors, producers, etc., and you can get support for your goal and projects. There's three prizes this week and a grand prize drawing at the end of the month! Week 4's blog came out yesterday. www.stage32.com/blog/november-write-club-week-4-the-art-of-the-pitch-wha...

Jon Shallit

well done

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