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SYNOPSIS:
Karl, a scientist caught between money and ethics, receives a promotion at work that puts him under the needle of his own experiments. His fight against the mind-controlling virus pits him and his cat against his girlfriend, the owner of a corporation dead set on world domination.
The attached document is the first Act of the story. It is currently being made into a comic book that will be released later this fall by Sailor Comics (http://www.sailorcomics.com). If you are interested in reading the full thing, please contact Caleb at reluctantbunniesfly@gmail.com