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Vanessa Baker must spend the night in the old family mansion in order to receive her inheritance. Three friends agree to help her. It is Friday the thirteenth. Not much sleeping will be done this night.
SYNOPSIS:
In order to receive her inheritance, Vanessa Baker must spend a Friday the Thirteenth in the old family mansion as set down in her uncle's will. Three friends, William, Derek and Andrea join her. A Prophecy written down in a poem by her Uncle Walter, tells of what they can look forward to. And it starts at midnight.
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