Hi first of all I will tell you I am a junior screenwriter and what I am commenting I don't know if it is reliable but where you write 'it is her first time saying it' I don't know if it is okay becau...
Hi first of all I will tell you I am a junior screenwriter and what I am commenting I don't know if it is reliable but where you write 'it is her first time saying it' I don't know if it is okay because how can the viewer see that it is her first time saying it? I don't know if it's helpful to you, hello, good work.
Intriguing! Consider (age) if important. Check spelling (eg, REVIEL) and that word "compilating."
Hi first of all I will tell you I am a junior screenwriter and what I am commenting I don't know if it is reliable but where you write 'it is her first time saying it' I don't know if it is okay becau...
Expand commentHi first of all I will tell you I am a junior screenwriter and what I am commenting I don't know if it is reliable but where you write 'it is her first time saying it' I don't know if it is okay because how can the viewer see that it is her first time saying it? I don't know if it's helpful to you, hello, good work.