Hey guys, my name is Kumasi. I'm new here.. and was wondering if you guys could provide your invaluable opinion on my first upload? Would be much appreciated! Thank you guys!
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I like your energy and delivery, very convincing, but your presentation can be improved. Try it again, but this time, sit on a bench on a busy street, a front steps or some place with distance in the background and your talking to someone. They can be listing to you or they can be ignoring you. Doing this will give you something to bounce off of and make your emotions more believable like this still from my recent work. I look forward to seeing more of your work.