Your Stage : I need some feedback. Please help! by Rob "Rob G" Gosbee

Rob "Rob G" Gosbee

I need some feedback. Please help!

Optimum Films, Inc. is working on a Hip Hop lifestyle vlog. We need some feedback to improve the show and I thought the Stage 32 community might be able to help, since you are a really supportive place to show work. Please let us know if the show works for you or if their is anything we can do better. Thanks! https://youtu.be/w-Xc53D8VOE

Dan MaxXx

it’s too long in my opinion and cheap production value- a locked camera, one location and stick figure cartoon insert shots.

Don’t know the audience you are targeting. Can’t see this appealing to young people.

My other suggestion: replace Host with a younger person.

Rob "Rob G" Gosbee

I can't thank you enough for this comment. It's the type of shit that really motivates a cat to murder the next video.

Doug Nelson

I managed to stay with it for 4:15. All I can say is that I'd sure like to have my 4 minutes back.

Rob "Rob G" Gosbee

Hey Doug, thanks for watching! I'd gladly trade you four minutes of my life to watch something of yours if you had anything to watch.

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