Your Stage : Feedback by Gianluca Di Tullio

The film shows your starting out, it probably is your first or second shortfilm. Main problem in this video are sound and music, but it all comes from lack of story and mediocre scripting. Also the acting is not very convincing. But hey, you made a movie and if you work on your craft you probably make a next one that will be better. I made this quality of film in my first year at filmschool. A big improvement for this clip would be a more mature voice-over at the beginning.