Screenwriting : Looking for someone to ready my script by Ashley Byron

Ashley Byron

Looking for someone to ready my script

I have finished my first draft of my first screenplay I was looking for someone to read it and give me feedback .

Pamela

I'm happy to read it! pamelainmidway@gmail.com

Pamela

Got it! Give me a couple of days.

Corey Piper

What’s it about?

Pamela

Ashley: Here's an opportunity! Pitch to Cory!

Ashley Byron

Corey and Pamela Its about a man who is in a plane Crash and is presumed dead but 6 months later he wakes in a hospital with a new face because his face was burned . He wakes up with no memories and hears a voice in his head to go back to coastal and that where he meets what once was his wife Avery as Jake but west but now he goes by the Name Carter Wright and starts dating him but she has no clue that she actually dating her husband and its her son Ty who has a dream that is Grandfather tells him that his dad is alive because he is not in heaven . Now Ty knows that his dad is alive but no one believes him because they all say its impossible until one day Carter has enough flashbacks to remember his old life and starts saying things to Avery that only Jake would know .

Corey Piper

Interesting premise. Not the type of project I gravitate towards but it has merit. First question two questions that came to mind are “how did he get a new face?” and “I think I would recognize my wife’s body if she came back with a different face.”

Omar Elkhechen

I would be grateful to read it! Omar.elkhechen1@gmail.com

Ashley Byron

Thank you I will send it to you. I appreciate any feedback you could give me.

Ashley Byron

Corey Piper He had plastic surgery is how he got his new face .

Ashley Byron

Working on my second Draft . Finding my way home to you .

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