Good evening screenwriting fellows,
My name is Covinfox and recently I just established my literary agency, I am passionate and dedicated to polish up your story, give you thorough and insightful feedback and coverage, going through the writing process with you and offer you constant feedback and more... with a reasonable and rather cheap price :)
I hope you can come to take a look and I would love to talk about writing with you! :) Thank you all for your time and interest:
If you have any further questions, please don't hesitate to ask :)
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No offence. You are not a literary agency, you are a coverage service. Which are as common as autumn leaves.
I hope this helps. From a sales point of view.
Money = Security in a modern world. As you may be aware, in Maslow’s needs, security is a base need. So your service has to provide more value to the person than the security they have retaining their money.
Unfortunately your site has nothing much more than “give me money”. You need to build credibility with your target audience to be seen as value. Value being something worth more than the money they are willing to give you. That’s correct. You have to be worth more than the money they are giving you.
Thank you for the feedback, that would be a goal I'm aiming to achieve