Introduce Yourself : SCRIPTS that will STIR YOU by Dartanyan Adkins

SCRIPTS that will STIR YOU

Greeting from California. My name is Dartanyan Adkins. I have two complete features that are looking for a studio to bring to the big screen.

TITLE: OLD GLORY

GENRE: ACTION/ADVENTURE

HOOK: Take an epic adventure into the skies as a veteran Airforce pilot uses a decommission bomber to rescue his captured grandson

TITLE: GRAVYARDSHIFT

GENRE: HORROR

HOOK: Find out what crawls out from the dark when a guy works the GRAVEYARD SHIFT at local convenient store

If you or your agent has any interest and would like a query letter, please feel free to contact me Email: cali_giant@yahoo.com

Pete Whiting

Sounds like Iron Eagle but reversed. Ahhh Iron Eagle....the best and the worst movie at the same time. When you wanted to go to school with a walkman strapped to your leg. Anyway, good luck with your films and well done for completing them. So many make a start and never finish them.

Roy Phillips

I think you need better loglines, especially the second one.

Rutger Oosterhoff

... The second one isn't a logline. It's a tagline. But you need those too.

Dartanyan Adkins

Thanks fellows. I'm working on improving my craft

Tasha Lewis 2

Welcome!

Mike Taime

Like the second one Graveyard shift, sounds like something you could direct and produce with a limited budget. Best of luck to you

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