Hey everyone,
I have finally finished my attempt at a 2 page written pitch to be used on here for pitch sessions and wanted to know if anyone would be willing to take a look at it and see if it's done right or how I might improve on it. I have my first pitch scheduled for the 1st of May so any feedback would be awesome. Thanks a bunch!
https://1drv.ms/w/s!AuoAjiXoV_X5f3KvIQSgvSoa5Q0?e=XeHAFr
P.S. It opens through google's onedrive once you highlight it, right-click it, and select the open link option. I didn't know how else we can post something like that on here so if there's a better way, I'd love to know it :)
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I'll have a look.
Thanks a ton, I really appreciate it!
I'd shorten your logline a bit. Not sure if it's just the way my PC opened it but it was longer than 2 pages. Pitches are limited.
well it didn't open with me either but i would like to have a look over it
It definitely is a little over 2 pages, not just on your computer lol. That's one of the things I wanted checked out. What would you recommend I cut out for the logline?
Shaden- Is it alright if I try to send it to you through the email on here, maybe I can attach it as a PDF on there?
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Tim: Give me an email (You can PM here) so I can send my feedback.
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tim here is my e-mail shadenhamza78@gmail.com and sure send as PDF file
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Good luck in your first written pitch Tim Mihocik! Remember that you still have some time to tweak your pitch because you do not need to send it in until May 1st. Keep us posted on how it goes.