This is my first-ever Logline: Help me know better by reviewing it please.
A girl, remorseful for her parents' death, learns she has alien abilities. She tries to learn and control them and then agrees to use them against humanoid creatures that are destroying her world.
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Grieving the death of her parents, a young girl discovers that she has super-powers. She finds a new purpose in using her powers to battle alien invaders destroying her world.
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My version added to the others is to leave out the parents death altogether - "A girl learns she has super powers which must be controlled and used to save the world from alien invaders". - - Good luck - it sounds intriguing.
Thanks Christiane Lange, Damian Lloyd and Tony Greenberg for the feedback. Actually this is a logline for the first ever 100 page long script that I wrote for a competition within 15 days and I REALLY wanted someone professional to take a look at it. Thank You So Much.