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Simone Bartesaghi

Feedback from producers

Hello everybody, I'm a film director, and I'd like to get feedback from producers about my Directing Reels. I have a short one (2 minutes montage) and a longer one (around 4 minutes) with some scenes.

The short one is linked in this post.

Thank you for your help,

Simone

Brandon Keeton

Nice. I like how it flowed together. Good music choice too.

Vital Butinar

Hey Simone Bartesaghi I actually checked out both reels. The longer one and the shorter one but I'm not a producer just beginner filmmaker with a lot less experience than you guys.

For me the longer one is a lot better because it's more engaging.

You basically fall into it and start watching it as a film which in my opinion is what you want as a director right? Engage the audience.

Where as the shorter one is nice but because of only shots and music, it feels a little disconnected. The viewer doesn't catch on to what's going on but just tries to look at the pictures without understanding any of the context.

Now if you can find a way to cut the longer one down to a shorter length and keep it in the same format I think you have something really engaging that represents what you do as a director.

By the way nice shots and scenes.

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