Hello to all the Producers and filmmakers.
This is Kushal on this side.
I am a very young scriptwriter and very new to the industry, I have a romantic suspense web series script. Please allow me a chance. Here is the logline of the story, and the pitch deck too. Please do revert back. I seriously need an opportunity to show my potential.
Title- It's a Secret: The Unrevealed Love Story
Genre- Romantic Suspense
Logline- The story begins in a dark cell of Afghanistan where captain James Scott and Seargent Justin are narrating their own story to a fellow soldier. The story runs in the flashback describing the events that attracted two young hearts belonging from two opposite professions. This unique love story of Captain Scott and Dr.Jenifer goes through a series of cute, romantic as well as suspicious events and hence signifies the title of the story, “It’s a Secret: The Unrevealed Story”.
Great to meet you, Kushal Singh, and welcome to the community! Awesome, thanks for sharing your logline! I noticed you posted it on your profile as well - that's a great start! You can also give feedback on others' loglines and request they return the favor (our members do a lot of script exchanges). https://www.stage32.com/loglines
One thing I can tell you is that loglines are typically one sentence, no more than two. Your sentences are telling us how the story is told, not necessarily what your protagonist wants/needs and their stakes.
Don't take my word for it, though - why not post in the Screenwriting Lounge as get some more feedback? https://www.stage32.com/lounge/screenwriting
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Hi Kushal - glad you joined Stage 32! Post what's going on in your writing!