Your Stage : First voice acting / narration reel! by Steven Heil

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KiUo_9txu14&ab_channel=StevenHeil I've always wanted to get into voice acting and narration! I listened to some different professionals' reels to use as references and created my own reel after researching recommended lengths (I worked off of sample scripts). Any and all advice would be appreciated! Would this reel be good enough to submit to some agencies?