Introduce Yourself : Need help picking my "personal connection" by Jerry Suits

Jerry Suits

Need help picking my "personal connection"

I have my LogLine (*) for one of my scripts; however, I don't know which of three personal connections () is most appropriate for it.

TRANSITION ZONE-A Romantic Adventure

(*) In 1971 a socially awkward grad student must trek to the Amazon to collect a rare, venomous tree snake. Fredrico meets Sasha Anna- a strong, independent, impulsive woman- who studies isolated, indigenous tribes. In the Amazon they encounter drug-smuggling guerrillas, a tribe of cannibals, and a deranged army officer.

It's Romancing to Stone meets Indiana Jones

When Fredrico's Professor tells him his 10-year time to get his PhD has expired, Fredrico is devastated until he pitches the Amazon trek to collect the rare snake that the prof treasures.

More snakes raises the stakes.

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() My personal connections:

(1) My ex-brother in law was offered the same "trek", but he refused it because he had a clear path to completing his PhD. He told me several relevant adventures he had in the jungle.

(2) I barely earned my PhD in 9+ years, and I would have felt my life was waisted if time had expired.

(3) After visiting a new museum, I was looking at the Board of Directors when a Latino family looked at them. The father/husband said, "That Mexican (Dr. David Garcia) does not belong..." withe the others-Anglo men.

---- Thanks for any help you can give me!

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