After realizing that some parts of my screenplay weren't consistent with the character, I made some edits so it flows better. Moments like this make me feel like a true writer. Check out the Logline for my screenplay, Bloom, and let me know what you think. I attached the script as well.
Screenwriting : Finished fixing my screenplay by Chelsea Beckley
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Well done, Chelsea Beckley! The whole community is behind you. Keep it up and keep us posted. And you're always welcome to reach out to me directly at j.mirch@stage32.com - I am the Director of Development Services at Stage 32. When you're ready reach out to me!
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Jason Mirch I consulted with a script reader and he told me there was a lot of tweaking to be done with characters so I had to go back to page one unfortunately, but I think this will be way better.