Empath - Logline:
An MMA fighter encounters a precarious situation beyond the confines of the cage when, by chance, she unintentionally absorbs the suffering and awareness of a mob accountant.
Screenwriting : And finally... by Scott Morse
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Sounds interesting, Scott Morse. Great tagline!
I suggest adding an adjective for the fighter.
And I suggest telling what the precarious situation is. Or is "absorbs the suffering and awareness of a mob accountant" the situation?
I also suggest adding the story goal and stakes.
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I love the poster and the set-up!
Now I’m looking closely and see you got some attention from a comedy festival. Is this a comedy? In that case, the poster and logline are not indicating that.