Screenwriting : The Growing Shadow by Rikhard Tolonen

Rikhard Tolonen

The Growing Shadow

Hi all — I'm a Finnish screenwriter working on my first dark fantasy feature. I just finished a spec script called The Growing Shadow, about a battle-scarred warrior hunting the vampires who took his wife — while his friend hides with the children, unaware the creature stalking them is the woman he once loved.

It’s been quite a journey building this world — a blend of dark mythology, tragedy, and survival.

Would love to connect with others writing horror, fantasy, or supernatural dramas!

Happy to trade thoughts or logline feedback. Let’s support each other.

Maurice Vaughan

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Congratulations on finishing your script! The Growing Shadow sounds exciting!

Maurice Vaughan

I just checked out the logline on your profile, Rikhard Tolonen. I think it's a solid logline except "from the growing shadow behind them." I think that part's vague. I suggest explaining what the growing shadow is.

Rikhard Tolonen

Thank you for your kind comment and feedback . I really appreciate it

Rikhard Tolonen

It was really good feedback. I revised the logline. Your feedback is much appreciated

Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Rikhard Tolonen. I like the changes you made to your logline. It's a stronger logline.

Rikhard Tolonen

Thank you , really appreciate.

Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Rikhard Tolonen. Can't wait to watch it!

Lindbergh E Hollingsworth

I love a good vampyre story!!

Taskeen Hashim

Rikhard Tolonen it's good to see fantasy writers . I am a screenwriters and novelist . recently finished my fantasy scripts . I would be happy to collebrate

Rikhard Tolonen

Hello Taskeen. Nice to meet you. Would be nice to collaborate.

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