Hello Everyone!
I'm going to make myself vulnerable (alongside others here) and share my work!
I'm currently working on creating a pitch deck for my award-winning 30-minute dramedy TV pilot, which focuses on a female MMA fighter.
Logline: Worn down by life, an underpaid & bookish receptionist finds herself unexpectedly pummeling a mugger one cold night—a beating that gets her invited into the violent world of MMA fighting.
Here's a couple of links for more info:
https://writers.coverfly.com/projects/view/939743f8-32ee-4e42-be57-3ac34...
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Love this concept, Jackie Letkowski such a unique and layered entry point into the MMA world. That logline hooked me immediately! Also just realized we’re both SCAD grads so great to see fellow alumni out here pushing bold, character-driven stories forward. Wishing you the best with the pitch deck would love to keep up with how it develops!
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And Still Champion... sounds interesting, Jackie Letkowski! And I like the title! I haven't seen any shows that focus on a female MMA fighter. Right now, your logline is just the setup. I suggest adding the goal and stakes.
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Thanks Shadaè Lezama !!! Would love to hear what you're up to! Great to meet you on here :)
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Thanks @maurice vaughan! I really appreciate the feedback!
You're welcome, Jackie Letkowski.