Its about a person named Colleen, who finds herself in an otherworldly place, where everything she’s ever killed, now kills her. Its a story of redemption by means of revenge.
I’m not a professional screenwriter, so the script is ok at best, but the concept is brilliant!
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Maybe a little more description of the characters other than the name and age?
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Hi, Gilbert Chavez. Welcome to the community. Stage 32 has a blog that'll help you navigate the platform and connect with creatives and industry professionals all over the world (www.stage32.com/blog/how-to-successfully-navigate-the-stage-32-platform-...).
Stage 32 had a live Community Open House the other day. It'll also help you navigate Stage 32 and connect with creatives and industry pros. You can watch the recording here: www.stage32.com/education/products/stage-32-july-community-open-house
I suggest getting feedback on your script so you can make it better. Stage 32 has feedback services (www.stage32.com/scriptservices).
And I suggest checking out this blog for up-and-coming screenwriters: www.stage32.com/blog/the-questions-up-and-coming-screenwriters-need-to-a...
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Thank you!!
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You're welcome, Gilbert Chavez. What's your script about?
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Its about a person named Colleen, who finds herself in an otherworldly place, where everything she’s ever killed, now kills her. Its a story of redemption by means of revenge.
I’m not a professional screenwriter, so the script is ok at best, but the concept is brilliant!
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Unique concept, Gilbert Chavez!
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Interesting concept. Keep revising and polishing your screenplay!