I asked perplexity.ai to write a synopsis for one of my screenplays and was pleasantly surprised. I used most of it for the synopsis below. I would be interested in your opinion. Does it sound AI generated? Would it make you want to read the screenplay?
https://www.stage32.com/profile/47534/Screenplay/Whyte-laydie
It is not clear from your AI generated synopsis who is the main character. So it doesn't make me enthusiastic.
You have some great elements within your content, but it definitely needs to be reworked. It seems like a broad stroke of a story. It could be interpreted as an AI synopsis. A personal touch needs to be added such as a clear Who, What Where, When, and how. What is at stake here? What is stopping your protagonist from reaching his goal?