I want to build on a solider basically destabilizing a global regime without getting to literally into realistic scenarios of terrorism that will keep it from getting picked up. Any suggestions or tips?
Logline: In a future where world hunger, crime, and debt have been eradicated under a single global regime, a forgotten soldier discovers he was engineered as part of a covert experiment—one of the hidden Children of Chaos, designed to awaken and unravel utopia from within.Screenwriting : I’m creating a new script and need help to not blur the line by Cortez Saulsberry
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Interesting concept, Cortez Saulsberry! Maybe hint at the terrorist scenes instead of showing them. And since it's the future, maybe come up with a different way of terrorism so producers/etc. aren't scared away from your script because of modern terrorism.
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Okay that sounds like a plan since it’s sure a volitie subject Maurice Vaughan
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Hi! I don't understand the idea behind this script. Is it about fighting against someone else's will and authority over oneself? In that case, you need a clear antagonist for the protagonist to fight against. Or is it about the protagonist fighting against a system that hides a terrible secret and is not perfect but rather flawed and cruel? I don't understand your script idea.
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The protagonist is undoing everything the regime built by using him. It’s flawed because it’s built off a false narrative of peace and he feels used and tossed aside so he’s looking for purpose again because war is all he knows Arthur Charpentier