Animation : Final Animation Ready for Feedback! by Cyrus Sales

Cyrus Sales

Final Animation Ready for Feedback!

Our team took a unique approach on this project: we started by using ChatGPT to generate creative prompts. From there, the team voted on their favorites and we created one short animation.

This is the final version of the animation, and we’re looking for thoughtful feedback on a few key points:

The story being told – does it make sense and engage the audience?

Consistency of lines from scene to scene

Overall impressions and suggestions

We’d love to hear your insights to help us continue improving our storytelling and animation process!

Wyman Brent

Cyrus Sales, I like the look of it. It appears consistent to me. The music sounds right for the mood of the piece. My favorite was the laughing pigeon at the end.

Cyrus Sales

Wyman Brent thank you for the feedback! Our biggest focus has been consistency between artist especially when the artist has different art styles. For our next animation we are going to compose the music so we can tailor it a bit more. Finding unique ways to add personality into each animation.

Patrik Gyltefors

Cyrus Sales, it looks great! There is a glitch at the collar tips at around 7s that draws the attention, so I would recommend manually fixing those few frames.

Banafsheh Esmailzadeh

I like it! It’s pretty smooth and whimsical. Can’t wait to see what you do next!

Hadrien Hein

Hello, the movie is great. There's just a problem with the back part of the coat, when the character walks, at the beginning. It seems to be an overlap, but It goes out of the lineart.

Cyrus Sales

Patrik Gyltefors great eye! Thank you for catching that. Funny when you're looking at something for so long how it all starts to blend together.

Cyrus Sales

Banafsheh Esmailzadeh thank you! We'll have at least two new animations our for the holiday seasons. Excited to share the process here, might do some videos of our process flow for anyone interested.

Cyrus Sales

Hadrien Hein - thank you for the feedback. We have some minor things to keep in mind as we continue working together but the overall feedback gets me excited!

Bob Harper

Nice work - great shot selections.

Wyman Brent

Cyrus Sales, I would enjoy seeing videos of your process flow.

Rick Wheeler

That’s awesome

Rick Wheeler

Was it animated with AI too?

Cyrus Sales

Bob Harper thank you!

Cyrus Sales

Wyman Brent let me know if you'd like to be apart of our newsletter, we share behind the scenes, tips and process flow with our community :)

Cyrus Sales

Rick Wheeler no sir. The most AI we used was Chatgpt to create the prompt, from that point forward there was a creative actively working each role.

Wyman Brent

Cyrus Sales, of course I want to take part in your newsletter.

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