Hi folks. Just completed a project and would love some feedback on the logline.. Thank you.
Title: Minor Heroics
Genre: Comedy
Format: TV
Length: 45 pages
An avoidant slacker in a city enjoying a 5 year truce between Superheroes and Archvillains accidentally reignites the war when the Boss of All Villains - bored to tears - offers a $100 million dollar prize to the one lucky schmuck who can give him an excuse to start kickin' Superhero ass again.
Thx folks.
Congratulations on finishing Minor Heroics, Josh Brody! Really unique concept!
What about this: In a city enjoying a 5 year truce between Superheroes and Archvillains, an avoidant slacker accidentally reignites the war when the bored Boss of All Villains offers millions to the schmuck who gives him an excuse to start kickin' Superhero ass again.
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Hey Maurice - this is actually much better. Thank you for the edits!
You're welcome, Josh Brody. I can't wait to watch Minor Heroics!
You could post your script on your profile. Producers search profiles for projects. That and networking are how I sold four short scripts to a producer. Click the gear symbol in the top right-hand corner and select “Edit profile” in the drop-down menu. Scroll down to “Loglines” and click “Add/edit loglines” to the right of “Loglines.” You can also post your script on your profile this way: www.stage32.com/loglines (near the top where it says “Add a Logline”)