Does this logline work for you?
A burned-out photojournalist stuck running a Beverly Hills mall portrait studio must become a miracle-working Glamour Artist to save his job, his eccentric crew, and their flagship status—just as his acting-wannabe assistant manager has twins in a rare “two dads, one delivery” situation, forcing him to choose between a New York fashion dream and the world’s strangest family photo.
Hi, G. Katich. I’m a Stage 32 Lounge Moderator. I wanted to let you know I moved your post from the Introduce Yourself Lounge to the Your Stage Lounge. You can ask for feedback on your logline in your introduction post, but you need to introduce/reintroduce yourself to the community. You could check out other posts in the Introduce Yourself Lounge to get ideas for your introduction post. Let me know if you have any questions.
Express-O-Foto sounds fun and unique. I like your logline's flow, but it's really long (60 words). I suggest keeping it to 35 words or less/around 35 words.
MAURICE, THANK YOU! ;-)