Screenwriting : Breaking & Entering: Are You Killing Your Screenplay on Page One? The Description Crimes That Readers Punish by Barri Evins

Barri Evins

Breaking & Entering: Are You Killing Your Screenplay on Page One? The Description Crimes That Readers Punish

Are you guilty of first-page faux pas? Beware the description flaws script readers judge harshly. Don’t earn a negative verdict before Page Two! https://bit.ly/description-crimes #writing #screenwriting #writingcommunity #screenwritingtips #Description #cinematicwriting #TerryRossio

Breaking & Entering: Are You Killing Your Screenplay on Page One? The Description Crimes That Readers Punish
Breaking & Entering: Are You Killing Your Screenplay on Page One? The Description Crimes That Readers Punish
Are you guilty of first-page faux pas? Barri Evins exposes the description flaws script readers judge harshly. Don't earn a negative verdict before Page Two!
Carolyn Boone

Thus is an awesome article and a great reminder to grab the reader, (and by extension, the audience), from page 1!!!

Rutger Oosterhoff

.... All great advice!, but "hot" tears, really?! After reading that in a screenplay , I'm out.

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