Hi everyone,
I'm excited to share the first official teaser for my animated short film: War And Cheese.
The project combines cinematic storytelling with real-time production workflows and is being developed as an solo/independent production. This teaser is an early glimpse into the world, atmosphere, and direction of the film as it continues to evolve.
Reaching the point of publicly sharing the project feels like an important milestone, and I'm looking forward to developing it further over the coming months.
I'd love to hear your thoughts and feedback.
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Vencata Satish Babu Korta,
This looks really good! Warning: Unsolicited Advice: The visual filmmaker in me would have liked to have seen a medium close shot of the castle climber scaling the turret. Keep the original clip at 59 seconds. Insert the new medium close shot at the end of the original tower climb shot and and edit the front of the original clip to to accomadate the short new shot. By showing us the effort, I feel that this will bring the viewer into the the story and showcase the skills and cunning of your character without saying a word. It's a show, don't tell edit idea. The visuals are stunning and would in my humble opinion really pop on screen with the right color correction applied to give it a cinematic polish and feel that would truly serve to underscore and enhance the vision and beauty of the mis en scene. Keep us posted on your progress. I took forward to seeing more.
Hey James, thanks a lot pal for such detailed feedback. Totally agree, that the medium shot would have elevated the scene even better. And i see your advice is coming from a passionate heart, and I appreciate that. Sure, i will consider and take these improvements for the next reveal/trailer down the line.