Just had an amazing TV pilot feedback session with Spencer Robinson. His feedback was thorough, honest, and incredibly helpful. I hghly recommend him for consultation sessions!
Reminder (stark) about always ALWAYS having a clear A and B story and knowing what both are and being able to say each storyline in one sentence -- and to read (re-read) the Friends pilot as a great example of this.
Hey Mark, this is Leonardo from the Stage 32 team. I just wanted to let you know I moved your post from Screenwriting to Your Stage, as it fits much better there. Let me know if you have any questions, and all the best to you!
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So great to hear! What was the most valuable note you received?
Reminder (stark) about always ALWAYS having a clear A and B story and knowing what both are and being able to say each storyline in one sentence -- and to read (re-read) the Friends pilot as a great example of this.
Hey Mark, this is Leonardo from the Stage 32 team. I just wanted to let you know I moved your post from Screenwriting to Your Stage, as it fits much better there. Let me know if you have any questions, and all the best to you!