In production of my first feature film. Here is the first cut of the trailer, tell me what you think. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aKLE6nD3kro
Anything Goes : Blissfully unmarried by Derrick Shaw
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Looks good I would pay to see it, there are a few scenes that are rough and too fake but you can add they up as the comedy part or redo them. The story line is old but solid. Most of the visuals are on par (what did you shoot with?) I know it's only a trailer but the cutting seems off on some parts slowing down the flow.
I like the plot, but I think some of the characters need to put a little more 'animation' or drama in their lines. Please check out my screenplay, The Seductive Schoolhouse Scandal when you are ready for a new production. It is not a comedy, but definitely a winner.
I like it, Derrick. Just tighten up a few scenes. I think I saw some of the actors looking at the camera. It looks like it's going to be very funny.