Filmmaking / Directing : Feedback Please by LB McGill

LB McGill

Feedback Please

This is a draft of the song we're putting in our movie Dead Serious. Music by Lucas Maddox Lyrics by : Jamie O'Connor. This is what I would like to know. Does it make you feel anything? Is it funny? And does the music and tune stay with you after the song is over? The scene: a group of community players are putting on "Dracula The Musical". http://www.stage32.com/profile/65778/reel It's on my "reel" page. It's called Still My Love...

Alan Pae

I think the piano is to loud and drowns out the singing. Other than that its fine.

LB McGill

Wow Alan. Thank You! I was beginning to think no one would listen to it lol- that helps a lot. Thank you for your feedback! Blessings :)

Simon Watt

Very good, the piano may be a bit loud when it all takes off, I really liked it and it had the community players feel, loved the male lead. great stuff

LB McGill

Thank you Simon!

Joseph De Cross

Not too bad Loralie. Just an advice: for my ears, sound like the singers are trying to catch up with the piano, but overall is a nice rehearsal! Great music though

Julian Nabunya

comedy fused with musical thing , nice stuff . good luck LB . i love the male voice .

LB McGill

@ Joseph, yes. it still needs a bit of work. First draft, really. Thank you! @ Julian. Oh he is very talented. You can listen and download his album here. He wrote the lyrics for the song! This is a link for his other work. blessings! Jamie O'Connor Music http://www.facebook.com/pages/Jamie-OConnor-Music/140210808332?sk=app_15...

Julian Nabunya

link copied .

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