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TENACIOUS
By Nicholas A
When Schizophrenia happens, a man and his wife must stand together as one for the sake of what’s to
come, showing challenges cant stay too long against the dogged human spirit.
SYNOPSIS:
Nevin and Simran are a loving couple and are fighting the battles of infertility in their day to day lives. To make matters worse, Nevin has issues with smoking and drinking, one fine day all hell breaks loose as he experiences Psychosis. This brings a hammer down on Simran too as she is caught up in all of it. But how they choose to fight it and triumph through it is the theme of the story.
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When I look at a logline, I want to hear what the story is about. This tells me nothing except "challenges" to the "dogged human spirit". That could mean anything. Too many loglines fail to tell me what the story is about, and concentrate on the emotional conflict. Without a story, the "emotional conflict" means nothing.
Thanks for the comments Phil. Will work on it.