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A pathologically frugal woman risks losing her home as her desperate attempts to avoid spending money spiral into chaos—until a man who values people over money forces her to choose between her savings and love.
SYNOPSIS:
Penny Ritchie is a forty-year-old accountant for whom money is not a tool, but the only way to control her life. She cannot part with it in a healthy way — a habit that comes from childhood, where her parents systematically take away her savings. Since then, Penny believes that if she lets money go, she loses everything.
Penny lives alone in a house bought on credit and faces the risk of losing it because of debt. She has savings, but still refuses to spend them and decides to sell the house, first doing repairs herself to avoid paying workers. Each short episode (60–90 seconds) becomes a new absurd “battle” between Penny and reality: attempts to fix the house end in failure, and every need to pay turns into inventive tricks, games, and manipulation.
When she finally has to call a repairman, a man enters her life who becomes her complete opposite. He is patient, calm, and not attached to money. He parts with it easily and truly does not understand Penny’s obsession. For him, people matter more than calculations. Their interaction turns into a series of short, escalating confrontations: she tries not to pay, he refuses to accept her rules. Over time, their conflict develops into a complex connection, where irritation gives way to respect, and then to feelings.
When an accident happens to the man and he needs expensive treatment, Penny faces a choice she cannot avoid with tricks: keep the money or save a person. For the first time in her life, she chooses to let go of control and spends her savings to save him.
At the same time, her friend, who works at the bank that gave the loan, finds out about Penny’s hidden money and forces her to repay the debt, which allows her to keep the house. However, a gas leak occurs soon after, and the house burns down. Penny receives an insurance payout — and, to the surprise of others, feels not grief, but relief and even joy.
In the end, Penny has money, but no house and no familiar system of control. She returns to her parents, who already live without her, and now they all have to rebuild a relationship in which money no longer serves as the only language.
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By the way, this is a fully developed micro-drama. The episode runtime is 5 minutes.
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