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The German Stukas prepare for dive-bombing run on the British convoys and other ground targets in Great Britain.
SYNOPSIS:
The German Stukas prepare for dive-bombing run on both land and sea in the Battle of Britain.
The logline seems to vague. Does the story follow the pilots and how they plan for the missions? Are there rivalries between the pilots? Themes of patriotism and moral qualms in war? Right now, it sounds like a documentary not a story.
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