Lakshmi Bose, your concept is fun with clear comedic potential, and it presents a solid inciting incident—two novelists writing the same book. However, the phrasing could be more specific to elevate the stakes and distinguish the tone. Phrases like “chaos ensues” are a bit vague; instead, consider specifying the type of chaos or rivalry that erupts. Are they sabotaging each other? Competing in outrageous ways to win over the same publisher? Adding a little more detail would give this premise a stronger hook and help it stand out.