My screenplay Family, By Default made it to the Quarterfinals of the PAGE International Screenwriting Awards Competition! Fingers crossed for the Semifinals.
Tyler Hill: Screenwriter in Albuquerque, New Mexico.
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Hey Everyone! Excited to be here and I just posted three new loglines for my scripts. I'd love if you would go check them out and let me know what you think!
Maurice Vaughan
- 3 months ago
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Wal Friman
- 3 months ago
They're all easy to follow and solid. Maybe a bit shorter with a tad more edge?
Two men whose relationship has weakened over the years set out on a road trip to celebrate their past, work through grief, and the ghosts that rule out speaking to one another.
When a dedicated but lonely middle school teacher becomes the guardian of his foul-mouthed teenage brother after their father’s death, the two must navigate their fractured relationship and child protective services—learning that family isn’t just about blood, but about showing up.
Maurice Vaughan
- 3 months ago
This sounds great, Tyler Hill! I'd definitely watch it. A dedicated, lonely teacher and foul-mouthed teen. It's like in those Buddy Cop movies where the personalities of the lead characters clash. I think your logline is solid except for two small things. I suggest changing "dedicated but lonely" to "dedicated, lonely." And I suggest changing "must navigate" to "navigate."
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After a trio of seasoned bank robbers pull off their latest heist, their carefully crafted escape plan goes sideways when they hijack the wrong getaway driver—an unassuming office worker who soon finds himself entangled in their high-stakes run from the law.
Maurice Vaughan
- 3 months ago
Sounds thrilling, Tyler Hill! I suggest having the office worker drive the logline since he's the protagonist. Right now, the robbers are driving the logline. And the protagonist isn't mentioned until near the end.
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After the sudden death of their best friend, two men whose relationship has weakened over the years set out on a road trip to find closure—forcing them to confront their past, their grief, and the ghosts that still haunt them.
Maurice Vaughan
- 3 months ago
Solid logline and unique Road Trip story, Tyler Hill. I've never heard of one like this, and I've never heard of a Drama Thriller movie about a road trip.
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3 months ago
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3 months ago
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