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PATCHLESS
By Tania Ocasio
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PATCHLESS is a gritty, female led character driven crime drama about the women left behind a notorious biker gang wives lovers mothers and survivors who are forced to pick up the pieces after the men either vanish or self destruct. As internal betrayals and unsolved murders rise these women must confront Adultery kidnapping dirty cops and a legacy of violence they never signed up for but are now bound to it . At the center is a sharp witted mechanics daughter who discovers her father was and undercover agent embedded in the gang. Fueled by grief and need for the truth she sets out to dismantle what’s left of the empire from the inside out even if it means becoming the thing she fears. This series flips outlaw tv on its head y placing Puerto Rican and Latina voices in the center of the action. Patchless is (Queen of the south meets Sons of Anarchy, Animal kingdom )
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Your logline is technically perfect, Tania Ocasio ! The title, though, needs to be clearer. I had to google what patchless meant. It sounds like a gripping and gritty story, that may be relatively inexpensive to produce. This is a good thing, in this biz. Believe me, you are on the right track.
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Patchless sounds incredible, unique, and thrilling, @Tania! I'm looking forward to watching this!
Solid logline and synopsis. One suggestion for the synopsis though: mention the women's rivals and the other gangs (if there are other gangs that fight against the women)
There's an extra space after "now bound to it" in the synopsis.
"on its head y placing" should be "on its head by placing," and "and undercover agent" should be "an undercover agent."
I don't think you need brackets around "Queen of the south meets Sons of Anarchy, Animal kingdom." "South" and "kingdom" should be capitalized.
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Thank you so much for the feed back
You're welcome, @Tania.
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