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Simon is a brilliant young man with a thirst for knowledge,. He will learn the hard way that when you’re facing an enemy, your back is exposed.
SYNOPSIS:
SYNOPSIS
Series 1.
THE ONE LINER:
An intelligent young man seeks knowledge to find his missing parents, instead he changes the worlds around him.
THE BACKGROUND:
The Earth has been devastated by a Nuclear War. By accident, Simon’s grandfather Mike, finds a Portal to another planet, named Salvation. Salvation is the centre of a portal systems, which connects to six planets, including Earth. Like an old revolver, the portal system, switches from Salvation, to the next planet for two months at a time. After finding an underwater base which controls the portals, Simon discovers the portal system can go anywhere, if you have the destinations co-originates. His parents are believed lost having entered one of these portals.
THE PREMISE:
Simon discovers the planet Salvation was once the Home World of an advanced race called the Roax. They had invented the Portal system and used it to travel through the Universe. They in the end opened a portal to a planet called Oregarth. It was held by a race nearly as advanced, as the Roax. The Oregarthian’s fearing the Roax, invaded their planet through the portal. This forced the Roax to flood their planet, making it unlivable. In the end the Roax abandoned their planet, leaving a small group to main the Portal base. When Simon discovers the Roax entities, he also finds a remaining Oregarthian, hiding in the lower caverns of the base. In exchange for access to the Portals, Simon agrees to take the Oregarthian named Rodon, home. This starts a series of events, which changes the Galaxies around them.
THE NEMESIS:
Simon has many enemies. One the Roax entities believe they are Gods.
Rodon, the alien trapped on Salvation is scared of
Simon’s rapid advancement in technology.
The Flax Federation, who hunt the Oregarthians, hate him for helping their enemy.
The Oregarthians, Radon’s people don’t trust him.
His main Nemesis is his own people, who fear his friendship with alien races.
THE HERO AND THE TWIST: Simon his girlfriend Kate and two aliens an Oregarthian named Radon and a Flax Federation captain named Jeddah are the heroes. They all help Simon make peace between the warring alien races, although a race known as The First, secretly speaks to Simon, advising him.
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