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In a near-future Africa ravaged by corporate-driven desertification, a resilient farmer and a brilliant geologist must outmaneuver a ruthless corporate mastermind to protect a miraculous underground aquifer—a discovery that could either restore the continent or become the catalyst for a global "Water War."
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"Dust Below the Surface" is an environmental thriller that unfolds through a retrospective interview on the program "Founder's Lounge," where innovators Baba Sulani and Jonas Wenger reflect on the "Water War" that reshaped the globe.
The final act is still unwritten, the screenplay is in draft version, but I will appreciate the feedback on it if someone really wants to read it
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Alexander Kruglov Powerful concept, Alexander. The mix of environmental stakes, corporate conflict, and the discovery of the aquifer creates a very compelling premise. Setting it in a near-future Africa also gives the story a strong global relevance. I’d be curious to see how the tension builds between the farmer, the geologist, and the corporate antagonist as the “Water War” unfolds.
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Full draft of the screenplay published!