Hi all in this great community. I'm looking for short film scripts from great writers in the EU - would love to discuss with writer/producer/directors
Hi all in this great community. I'm looking for short film scripts from great writers in the EU - would love to discuss with writer/producer/directors
I’m still a newbie screenwriter trying to figure things out. I’ve read a number of screenwriting books and many blogs as well as many screenplays. One thing that is still illusive to me is that in many screenplays have words in the action that are capitalized and I don’t know why. I know that the fi...
Expand postI’m still a newbie screenwriter trying to figure things out. I’ve read a number of screenwriting books and many blogs as well as many screenplays. One thing that is still illusive to me is that in many screenplays have words in the action that are capitalized and I don’t know why. I know that the first time a character is introduced you use all caps but often there are other words that are capitalized. For example take Allan Ball’s "American Beauty" here is a paragraph of action: “LESTER BURNHAM lies sleeping amidst expensive bed linens, face down, wearing PAJAMAS. An irritating ALARM CLOCK RINGS. Lester gropes blindly to shut it off.” This is the first time we meet Lester so it’s all caps; got it. I know that in shooting scripts sounds effects are all caps, but I’ve been told not to do that with spec scripts so maybe the “ALARM CLOCK RINGS” could be justified, but why is “PAJAMAS” in all caps??? I see this a lot in scripts is there a reason a rule I'm missing???
For special scripts CAMERA DIRECTIONS are a strict no. This is what I found in Screenwriters Bible and the umpteen number of articles which I read and I was also guided by my guru for about two scripts. Later I wrote scripts by myself along with my FB and a few online friends.
From experience I would say that camera directions are always a no no, not just because directors and producers dislike being told how to shoot the movie, but because you don't want ANYTHING in there...
Expand commentFrom experience I would say that camera directions are always a no no, not just because directors and producers dislike being told how to shoot the movie, but because you don't want ANYTHING in there that distracts from the story. Thus capitalisation should also be avoided except for when mentioning a new character, or for scene headings and sub headings. There are always exceptions to rules, but it's best to try not to put anything in your screenplay that brings the reader out of the story to consider say something like CAMERA TILTS UP TO SEE, or WE SEE... that's what I'm always striving to do, keep the reader hooked and in the story, not thinking about shots and so on... hope that helps :-)
If you stick with the basic rule of capping first character intros and sound effects, you should be good. And also mini-slugs, like in Beth's example above.
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My pleasure, Grant...Be sure to add a headshot along the way. It will help with your presence in the community!
Hi Richard, I am sorry mate I have really no friends yet, just starting. But I did try Facebook and with- in 3 days my page was taken over by other members, so I gave it the flick. But I will tell mates when I see them. Grant
Appreciate that, Grant...Still, add a headshot along the way...It will do you well around these parts.
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Hi Palaash, I've always wanted to make a film in India! What were you thinking?
Hi Philip, I see your old thread has sprung back to life :D Are you still looking? If so, what for?
Hi Philip, nice to know you! This is a post from many years ago, but still I was wondering if you're still looking for short scripts!
If you are, so far I have only one script (which has already got its first award), if you'd like I could email it to you; if interested, let me know :)