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By Mary Krell-Oishi

GENRE: Action, Comedy
LOGLINE: A young, slightly incompetent Korean-American government agent trainee is paired with a sexy, sophisticated slightly middle-aged agent and very unhappy future father-in-law to save his kidnapped fiancé and stop a terrorist plot.


Training with a sophisticated older government secret agent, a young Korean-American man must come to grips with the fact that his mentor thinks he’s an idiot. This is complicated by the fact that the younger man is engaged to marry the older man’s daughter. When terrorist forces from North Korea and the Middle East work together with a powerful European financier determined to bring the United States to its knees realize that the Agency has kidnapped their computer genius, they take the fiancé/daughter as hostage. The two men travel from Washington D.C. to Southern California to battle international terrorists, martial arts experts, sexy Amazon Guards and their bitterest enemy. Each other.

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