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THE HOARDER

THE HOARDER
By Jurgen Wolff

GENRE: Horror
LOGLINE:

When a group of young people forces their way into the house of an old hoarder to steal his gold they discover that in addition to discarded objects the house contains the souls of discarded people who are out for bloody revenge.

SYNOPSIS:

LAURA, traumatized by scars from a fire, is tricked into helping her boyfriend Jack and his friends break into a house owned by an old hoarder. They believe there is gold in the house. Instead, they find a portal for the spirits of people who have been discarded like the junk in the house. The witty Hoarder is the ringmaster as each of them is avenged in a suitably gory manner by the people they wronged. Beauty influencer, Petal, meets the chubby girl she drove to suicide. Dan meets the blind man he robbed and left to die. Snake is confronted by the man he ran over. Jack meets the old woman he romanced to steal her money--she's dead but still hoping they can marry. And Laura meets the spirit of the girl she was before the fire and gets a last chance to choose: live fully or die.

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Phil Clarke

Love the concept: clear and concise. The only immediate issue I have is regarding the phrase "discarded objects". As far as I'm aware, hoarders don't tend to hoard discarded objects.

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