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CREATIVE PROCESS

CREATIVE PROCESS
By Ritchie Stonian Johnston

GENRE: Fantasy, Comedy
LOGLINE:

A writer’s inner voices take physical form during a crucial rewrite, turning his home into a battleground of competing ideas, egos, and self-doubt.

SYNOPSIS:

Jeff Treagar, a struggling writer on the brink of a breakthrough, receives a call from a literary agent interested in his script—on one condition: he must deliver a rewrite within days. What should be a career-defining opportunity quickly unravels as Jeff’s creative process begins to manifest around him.

His inner voices take physical form—Magnus, a rebellious rockstar embodiment of creative instinct; Duane, his confident leading man; Paul, his anxious self-doubt; and Anatoli, a theatrical, overblown villain representing his worst tendencies. As feedback, distractions, and personal insecurities collide, Jeff’s home becomes a chaotic battleground of competing ideas.

When an unexpected visit from his well-meaning father introduces even more external pressure—sparking the arrival of a new “improved” protagonist—Jeff spirals into complete creative overload. Reality and imagination blur as every thought, note, and fear materialises, pushing him to breaking point.

Forced to step away, Jeff resets. Through reflection—and a clearer understanding of his own voice—he regains control of the chaos within his mind. Returning to the work with renewed clarity, Jeff reshapes his story on his own terms.

At his follow-up meeting, the rewrite is a success. With confidence restored and his creative process finally in balance, Jeff steps forward—ready not just to write, but to own his voice.

CREATIVE PROCESS

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Moses Jhon

Hey just read

Creative Process, really strong concept. If you tighten the conflict between Jeff’s inner voices, this could hit way harder happy to share a few quick notes if you’re open.

Ritchie Stonian Johnston

Thanks Moses Jhon I am always welcome to any pointers. (Sorry it took me so long to reply, I've been away for a few days)

Leonardo Ramirez

This sounds like a really fun premise Ritchie Stonian Johnston. I would consider adding a goal for the protagonist. It's not clear if the person is trapped and can't leave or he/she has to accomplish a goal in order to escape and what happens if they can't get out? Still...sounds fun!

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